First Draft

Today my group and I presented our first draft to the rest of the class. We received lots of positive feedback but also constructive criticism on ways in which we could improve the music video. The main point that we have discussed changing is the performance aspect, this is because our performance aspect is set in quite a dull and irrelevant setting, a black curtain in the background of a plainly dressed solo singer. We have decided to use multiple people for our performance, all separately singing different parts of the song but using the same shot. We will use a green screen to change the colour of the background of each performer. This way we can make the whole music video a lot faster paced and snappier. This will fit better with the song and the narrative part of the music video as the whole aspect is fun while trying to stay well structured. We have taken the criticism into account and will adjust the music video to accommodate the suggestions.